Monday, February 3, 2014

Tampered By: Michele Martin Bossley

 
Tampered
When Trevor get a new job at Ashton's Fresh Marketplace, working in the produce. Things go all wrong. Trevor first starts off working as a maintenance person then goes into cashier. That is when he started to hear about the tampering. Many things in the store were being messed with.
Trevor and his friends Nick and Robyn decide to find out who has destroyed the stores reputation. As time passes the list of suspects grow longer and longer. Could it be ex-employee Mattie, or Alex, their schoolmate who doesn't know when a joke has gone too far. This suspect has been putting bug like items in many foods like, grapes, and cashews.
The store found out that this suspect had put Peanut Butter in Oatmeal, which is the worst so far because of the multiple numbers of allergies to peanuts. This gets so serious that they call the police to find out who is doing this. When they find out who did this they are shocked. They did not think it would be who it was.

3 comments:

  1. Nice description! There were a couple mistakes. But overall, you did a really great job!

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  2. Sounds really good! I too agree that there were some grammar mistakes but over all it turned out really good!

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  3. Sounds good just don't forget to indent paragraphs!!!!!:)

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