Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Gym Candy

For Mike Johnson winning inst everything its the only thing. For mick Johnson, his father had been teaching him football since he was a little kid. Mike's Dad was a great football player thoughout high school and college. He would always tell mike about the big play that he broke against Oregon or the three broken tackles that turned into a touchdown against texas.
Mike has wanted to play football ever since he got the touchdown in his back yard against his dads giant arms. But now its real Mike is a freshman this year and he wants to get the chance to start as a freshman and play in high school football with his best friend Drew.
For mike nothing is as important as starting so he works hard every day he make the starting running back run for his money. but the big deal is that the coach never starts freshman,
His sophomore year he wants to get stronger so he goes to the a gym he works out every day, his trannier tells him that he has some steroids that he would like mike to try and so he does and, mike becomes stronger and better a fast.
Mike gets addicted to the steroids, But after the a Game his friend Drew caught him and he was in big trouble.

2 comments:

  1. You could have used better punctuation and capitalize words

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  2. There were a few spelling errors, punctuation errors, and even some capitalization errors too. Even the best make mistakes sometimes and this sounds like an amazing book!

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