Twilight
Twilight all begins with Bella at her moms house. She had been living with her mom for a while and she wanted to escape, because she didn't have any friends there and she feels as if she were in a zoo, locked up in a cage. When Bella's dad comes to pick her up, she was so relieved. She gave her mom a hug, and walked out the door to get in her dad's old, shaggy pickup truck.
Bella had been waiting for this moment for a very long time, and it finally came. "Now, Bella, we have to get you enrolled in school here." Her dad explained.
"Yeah, I have been thinking about that too. I'm really nervous." Bella said.
"Don't be. It will all be okay."
The weekend soon was over, and Bella had to go to school. She had been dreading the day of going to school there for a long time. But, she knew her dad wouldn't let her skip out on that, and plus, he is a cop. Bella's dad dropped her off and she walked into the school with a scared look on her face. Everybody was looking at her like she was a clown. The bell rang, and she headed to class.
The weekend soon was over, and Bella had to go to school. She had been dreading the day of going to school there for a long time. But, she knew her dad wouldn't let her skip out on that, and plus, he is a cop. Bella's dad dropped her off and she walked into the school with a scared look on her face. Everybody was looking at her like she was a clown. The bell rang, and she headed to class.
"Good morning, class!" Her teacher yelled. "We have a new student, would you like to introduce yourself?"
Bella started to sweat. "Umm, I'm, I'm, Bella."
"Nice to meet you, Bella, and welcome to the class."
Bella started to look around that class when she noticed a really cute guy, Edward.
They had talked for a while at lunch and got to know eachother really well. They began to hang out, when Bella had noticed that Edward was missing a lot of school. She began to wonder about him.
Why was he missing so much school? Why wasn't he texting, or calling her back? Why hadn't he let her know anything? Bella began to worry...
This review is really good, although I am a little confused. Other than that good job!
ReplyDeleteII like how you out dialogue into this! Yes it is a little confusing but good job!
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