Mr. Tucket book review 4
It is Francis birthday it seems like a normal day but he gets
a big surprise when his dad gets him a gun for his 14th birthday. So then he
goes to the back of the wagons so he can shoot his gun. But a couple of Indians
kidnap him. Now he is in the Indians village and he has a new mom. When he and
his mom are heading to their hut some Indians boys jump Francis.
Now Francis has to fight them but his mom sends him back to
the hut. One day in the village a man with one arm comes in so Francis runs to
the man to ask him to get him out of there. But his mother gets him back to the
hut. The Indians have this big feast for the man that came to their village and
Francis has to be in the hut.
Early in the morning Francis wakes up to the
one arm man’s hand over his mouth and the man says in a whisper “there is a
hoarse outside the village ride it straight then he will come to a creek wait
there for me “so Francis gets up and goes to the hoarse. Will Francis ever gets home?
I`ve read this book, and its a pretty good one, but you didn't do too well with your punctuation and staying on one subject and you didn't really give any detail.
ReplyDeletewhy is all the lettering squished??
ReplyDeleteI think it needs more detail.
ReplyDeleteYou did a pretty good job but repeated your self. But i liked the closing sentience on a cliff hanger.
ReplyDeleteYou did a pretty good job but repeated your self. But i liked the closing sentience on a cliff hanger.
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