PASSIN’ THROUGH
BY LOUIS L’AMOUR
book review #4
All I ever wanted was to just
go.
But nobody would let a
stranger just pass by,
They had to prove that they
could beat anyone that came through.
What I wanted was to eat,
bath, and find a place to sleep for the night. I would be on my way in the
morning. So why would men have to pull a gun on me and get there self’s killed?
I never did anything to make them mad, until they start thinking that they are
cool picking on the stranger, who’s just “Passin’ through”. The only reason I get people mad is because I
killed one of their buddy’s, after that I usually get hunted down and hanged.
But somehow get out of it. So just like any other day of going into a town, I
go to the saloon and buy some food and a drink. I wanted to eat and rest from the many miles I
came across the desert. But some guy thinks he would like to kill me, me who
was tired from traveling about 15 miles across the desert. Before he could reach for his gun I killed
him, not being in the mood to go through with the whole thing. Well after that
people thought they’d killed me for what I’d done. I was too tired to really fight; they brought
me to a tree and hanged me not waiting until I was dead. The Indian that I saved before I got into the
town came and cut me down. The horse that they had me on was right by me. It
was a very nice blue roan; it had a skull and crossbones on its rear. It would
take too long to go back and get my horse and things, I got onto the blue roan
and started to go when the Indian started to wave her hands saying “no bad
horse”, what was the Indian thinking this horse was the best I’d ever
seen.
I love how you made it sound like the character talking. It gave the review life, and pulled me in! You did a really good job.
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