Zom-B city starts in a junkyard and she makes her way to the city were she faces a lot of her challenges. She walks a long a interstate of deserted cars and there are zombies in them why are they in there.
Her skin feels weird in the sunlight. So she gets in a car and waits for night to come around but is she really the same as zombies are they going to eat her brains are they going make her there diner. When she gets out of the car a fat zombie comes over and smells her like she's a human but loses interest when he sees the hole in her chest.
She makes her way to her house and finds somebody painting a zombies on the way back. she asks what he is doing and he told her rand so they went back to his place and they listened to a radio for a long time and finally herd that a helicopter was come to pick up survivor in London.
The helicopter gets shot down and Becky Make her way back to the other side of town and finds herself in the middle of a building looking down on the street and somebody says That they have been expecting her.
I didn't know who 'her' or 'she' was until the end. Try to tell us who SHE is a the beginning.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on your punctuation and grammar.
ReplyDeleteYou could have used better punctuation and grammar.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know zombies where your style! I think you meant this as book review 3...am I wrong? And listen to your comments. Take a little more time to edit and revise before you post, please and thank you.
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