Walking A Thin Line
Every time Lauren looked in the mirror, she believed she was "fat". So, she decided to do something about it. Her friend, Andrea, knows that really Lauren is not fat. They had been friends for a very long time, so they know each other very well! Even though Andrea said that, Lauren insists to loose weight.
All Lauren wanted was for her crush Jay to like her. That's not a very smart thought to have. She thought loosing 20 pounds would make him like her. When Andrea notices Lauren's weight loss, she wants to start loosing weight too.
Though the girls don't know, they both are in a tight squeeze. They both are very skinny already, so why do they need to loose weight? Will Jay notice, or will both Andrea and Lauren's situations get even worse?
I think you could have put a little more in to this.
ReplyDeleteI like the question at the end.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds sooo good, but I think you could put a little bit more detail into this. Good Job!!
ReplyDeleteThe book sounds really good but you could have used a little more information. But I liked the ending.
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