Relentless is probably one of the best books of the decade, the book writer Dean Koontz has to be one of the best book writers of all timer because of the suspense he puts in his books. I love his books because, he makes the books so suspenseful that you are on the edge of your seat the hole time.
the first part of the book probably gives you the back story of the book the best. The beginning of the book starts of telling you about how the main character is a writer and his wife is a writer too. his 6 year old son is going to be the next albert Einstein, and how his new book had a special critic on it. That critics name is Sherman Waxx, he is a fairly old man who changes this book from the beginning Waxx is the bad guy it this book. He tries to kill the family of three and there dog named lassie.
The second part of this book starts off when cubby and his wife are in bed. Cubby hears a noise and wakes up softly, but flies up out of bed and hears Sherman say "Hack" and now he know that what he herd didn't come from the dream, but from the room that he was in. So cubby gets out of bed after making a sound, like he laid back down on the bed. But he went around the room and felt a chair, then when were the other chair was, grabbed it but felt pricks and then he got tazzed. His wife heard the scream that he gave off and, then she got tazzed, and fell out of the bed. cubby heard that and tried to crawl to her but got tazzed again. Then his wife called his named and got tazzed, again cubby heard it and tried to crawl over to her, and got tazzed again. But he kept going and got tazzed again, and kept going and again got tazzed. Then he passed out. He woke to find his wife gone, but he found her in the kitchen eating a cookie, he joined her. Milo there son was up stairs in his room.
Part three they have to leave there house because they hear a bomb about to go off.
It sounds good but try to add paragraphs, or at least breaks in the sentences. And you made couple of grammar and spelling mistakes, and you didn't capitalize a lot of your sentences and names.
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