Tuesday, March 5, 2013
Book Review 1: "No!" said Greg when he looked out the window. He couldn't believe his eyes when all he saw was SNOW!!!!! He didn't want his first day of spring break to start like this. Thus the story of Greg's cabin fever begins:-) This story is one of the funniest you will ever read, sure theses books may sometimes be stupid in hummer, but i have never read a more funny family book. Thank you Jeff Kinney for making these for all the world to enjoy:-)
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nice job
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ReplyDeleteFrom my reading of your review, this book sounds boring. No offense, but I just don't get drawn into books that are about seasons and kids hating them. But, I could never, in books about humor. It's probably a good book for you people that have read it though! Nice job.
ReplyDeleteNeeds punctuation, doesn't really portray the book. Consider revision, it should help.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds good. Although your review is a little despising of the book. It makes it sound boring. You need punctuation. Even though you use punctuation, it doesn't seem correct. I have to agree with Travis Nichols, consider revision. I hope that you don't take any offense to it. I an just being honest.
ReplyDeleteI think punctuation would really help this writing to be more interesting. Revising always helps me, I would suggest it. But other than punctuation, it sounds pretty good!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the other posts, its a good book review but, there are some flaws. Not to be hard on you or anything but you need to make the book review come alive. It was a good book review it just needs a little work. :)
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