The Silent Room
By Walter Sorrells
The book takes places in Virginia
with a boy named Oswald sometimes people call him “OZ”. His father just died
and now he lives with his mother. His mother then finds a new man and they
start dating for a while, then a few months later they get married.
Oz
hates his new dad. His dad works at his school he is a wrestling coach
so, he makes Oz do wrestling. Oz hates it and his step father beats him up. His
step dad frames him for drugs and has bad DVDs. He then gets sends to a school
for boys all the way in Florida Georgia. Near the boys home there is a big
swamp and in that big swamp he can never get off but then he starts to make
friends at his new home. Him and his friends have a plan to get off the island.
They have found an air boat and every night they build on it. One of those
nights they decide to move the air boat. When they move it they find a human
skeleton.
Then
things get worse as they find out that the owners of the school stealing money
from the kids by taking their trust fund and forcing them to sign papers they
have been putting them in this room called the silent room. They get
your money by strapping you down in a chair and put a bag over your head and
leave you there.
One
day he has to go and clean the owner’s house and he meets their daughter. They
like each other as she gives him a key that unlocks every door to the school. He’s
think there are going the get out of the school but the girl has set him up and
he finds out that his dad has set up a trust fund for him and it is worth over
two million dollars. So then he starts to work harder and faster on the boat with
the time he has they started up but they run in some troubles. What problems do
they have and will they ever get off the island?
As I read this article I thought to myself, "This cannot be revised." Then I realized it had even more grammar errors the first time I read through. I hate grammar errors. Liked how you introduced the plot though.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a lot of details. You made the book sound interesting. Great job with all the details.
ReplyDeleteGood job. You had me hooked into the book in the first sentence. You also had good plot development.
ReplyDeleteNice summary, Chase!
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