Freeze Tag
On Dark Fern Ally there were many families that live there. Once people move in they usually say in the same house for the rest of their life. The Trevor family has lived there for a while now, as well as Meghan's family. One evening when the children were playing yard games on girl, Lannie suggested that they play freeze tag. One thing all of the kids didn't know was that Lannie had this special power that, with one touch she could freeze anyone. Lannie was in love with West Trevor. While they played this game Lannie froze all the children, until West promised to always like Lannie best.
In High School Meghan and West are the perfect couple. Every other couple is jealous of them. Lannie is not happy about that, so she has a plan to get West all to her self. Her plan is the freeze Meghan to death. One night Meghan and West head out to his old truck and talk about what they should about Lannie. When they are about to leave Lannie comes and freezes Meghan and West.
Lannie unfreezes West and leaves Meghan. West promised to like Lannie best, as long she unfroze Meghan. West and Lannie start to go out. Lannie passes in her powers to West. What will happen? Will West return to normal?
I really liked the review. I thought your sentences sounded a little choppy, like they didn't flow. Great detail though.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds good, but it just sounds a little strange. No offense, but it just sounds like a more evil type of book. I liked how you made your sentences have more meaning though. I don't see that much anymore.
ReplyDeleteGood job, Raynie
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